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Next time, try to get at least a few more paragraphs in before your characters suddenly and inexplicably start tearing off their clothes.

crap

Sorry ,, but that was about the biggest waste of space ever,,, Minus 5

give up writing and take up road sweeping

Forget the haters! My neighbor, Peggy, was banging my Dad. She loved using me to get herself off. She knew she could not have my Dad, only sexually. She loved to use me, by having me lick her clean after my Dad had fucked her. She used to have me hide on the closet and watch. She was a very good teacher!

you will miss the story.

Good read. Thanks for sharing.