All Comments on 'No Regrets Pt. 01'

This story definitely needs anther chapter or more. It is just getting started.

A very well written first Literotica story. The was an interesting concept, and definitely would like to see additional chapters written.

First time? Congrats. You knocked it out of the park. My only complaint would be the length. Combine a few chapters maybe. But excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Nice start for your first story. Sure would like to know if more escapades are ahead

A good start so don’t leave us hanging

There will be more...the keyboard is clicking as we speak.

Nice try, some editors would help you. Keep it up.

Great begining. grammatical errors detracted from an otherwise great story. Keep it going.

Good story. You have a gift with the flow of the story. Just expand it.

Yes...nice nasty story about sister and brother...

How she knew he was there...I guess we will find out in the next chapter...

Looking forward to more of this story series...

Five**5**Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌋

Good premise.

But sex was meh.

He didn't try to visualize her pussy. Was it shaved? Hairy? Manicured?

Nothing with her breasts/nipples.

No over acting by her to onvolve him further?

Three stars.

Comment by Anonymous: I think maybe you missed some parts of the story;

"She walked over to the far side, she made the turn to the chase lounge along the back side of the pool, and there it was. Her boobs were nice with light brown nipples, slightly upturned, and about the size of a half dollar with little pencil eraser nubs. Her pussy was completely shaven, although it was hard to make out much at this distance, I could feel my dick slowly reaching full hardness, my senses more aware of the sexuality of the moment."

Not much to eat so far a 3