All Comments on 'Nude Noir Ch. 03'

as always a great story I would have liked a little more regarding Beth and sally and what they thought regarding Ian and the force. 5star

A nice finish. Thank you.

superb as always

Excellent little series, but I sense that the point at which you left it might lead to another case coming up for the naked detectives. Perhaps a little more revelation about Beth and Sally could come about.

As always, characterisation is excellent, action detail superb. Keep it up.

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Nice mashup of 2 genres. Enjoyed reading. Nudity and sex go well with anything, ie space/scifi, western (Bonanza), among others.

Excellent story, but needed Ian to be in a relationship with Pam at the start. After all, someone’s got to take the fall, sweetheart!

This certainly isn't the ordinary fare here at Literotica, but I enjoyed it immensely!

You did well, but I'd sure like to read more about Ian and Ali. This desrrves follow-up and continuation.

Yep, it was interesting from the start. You left it with a good ending for another visit.

Can't wait to see what they get up to next. Hopefully there is a next.

Great concept. Would like to see more of the noir!

So far so good! Hope to see more.

Ali is going yo control Ian even thonshe wore the colar...he was hesitant at the idea of fucking in front of an audience but just because Ali wanted it..he caved...wonder what else she can convince him to do ???...

Loved the story. Writing good with character development and follow through. Suspected something was up with Pam but never saw the reason for the behavior coming. A great surprise in a good story. Need to see resolution to Ali’s family dilemma and resorts owner. This story could be a runner, chapters and othe stories.