All Comments on 'Nude Noir'

You can’t leave us hanging...more, please!

While I do not like the noir style, I like the story. It does not have my attention the way the Investigation series did, but I am starting to like the main characters. I do want to read the rest of the story, so please keep working on it.

Your writing is always first-rate, with characters to care about. Please keep going!

Really looking forward to the rest of the story.

This is the start of a good story... I'd love to see where you take it

Excellent writing, as always. Please continue with the story.

This story is clearly worth additional chapters

This story with its' connection to the clothing-optional resort has potential, but is not up to the usual high standards. Ali's character does not have the depth we generally see. For one thing, she gives intellectual reasons for joining the case but seems mostly interested in playing active tourist. Since the drug dealing is so obvious, it seems like the owners could have found and dealt with it themselves. In short, this story is not up to the usual high standards.

Another fantastic story! Can't wait for the next installment.

I like your style. Nothing was overdone. Thank you for being an author I like to follow.

This is a good start with a lot of promise. You just cannot stop now.

this is what undercover work should be like. Yes much more please…

Life is tough but someone has to do it.

Read all of your stories and have you bookmarked. Look forward to new ones. I think a few of them should be in the Romance area instead/also.

I like all your stories and this is no excption. In general I like stories where there is a real plot and good character development and the sex or nudity organic to the story line. This story is plausable and does not have multiple paragraphs of intricate description to the point where it is like a color commentary to a game of Twister. I skim those. The best parts are "the chase" , disrobing and forplay. Once the characters are naked and rolling around in coitus the mystery is over. I hope you will continue this story, I gave it 5 *.

I have read most of your stories and enjoy them very much. I would like to see another chapter to this one. Thank you for your work.

OK I'm intrigued enough to look for part 2

Great start to this story! Sincerely hoping that you choose to continue it.

Like some of the others have mentioned, I am a fan of your work and have read many of your stories. This is a great start to what could become another favorite. If you (unfortunately) would decide not to post more chapters here I hope that you will share with us where to find the rest of this story. Please and thank you!

Absolutely would like to see more of this

Ok I’m intrigued. I will love to see where things progress from here. One thing I’d also like to see - more details with the sex scenes! I mean, come on! “Then she jacked me off” how about describing the sounds, sight, smell - all of it! We have senses, describe it using all 5!

Have read all your stories and enjoyed them very much. I am already hooked on this one and look forward to the next chapters.

I like it. I’m in for more.

Great start to a story series. Absolutely loved it. Thanks.

Great story. People act different when they're nude, that's for sure.

We know you can write sex stories, but this will work as a detective story too. And just funny enough. Please go on.

Long time fan of your work. This is different but I really do like it. Continue the series please

You're one of my favourite authors because I like your style and humour. You will have to continue writing this story, you can't leave us hanging :-)

Refreshing new angle from a great writer

Please continue.

Nice Twist on an old genre. It works!

As I have come to expect over the last few years, any story from H Stoner is a story worth reading. It’s a great intro to the characters, a great storyline, and I’m really looking forward to what comes next. John Grisham is my favourite author of all time, and lots of H Stoner’s work is similar (legal thriller-esque) but with a bit of nudity thrown in. Thanks Harry (?) & I look forward to many more of your stories over the coming years

Good start.

I have 3 authors that when they pop up in my list with a new story they get read first!! HSTONER is number 1, if you show up, I drop the story I am reading and beg for yours to start and then grow. You are a great writer, fun, exciting, erotic, captivating.

Keep this ongoing

Interesting and worth reading. Thanks.

Little else to say on your exceptional storytelling, and good skill giving it the noir feel.

I have a few issues with this story. Firstly we learn that Ian’s partner’s name is Allison Nance (“My friends call me Ali”). So then she becomes “Nance” for a few paragraphs, then “Allison”, then finally “Ali”. Not very consistent.

Then there’s the bad guys. “Hispanic-looking” with a dick bag. Of course he’s the bad guy. If he was white and nude he couldn’t possibly be the bad guy. Talk about stereotype? So how did he become a “gangbanger” so quickly? Ian (did I mention my name before?) soon has him sussed, especially when his dodgy dark-skinned be-thonged women with large tits and asses accompany him. But they don’t stay the night, luckily. They are rude Hispanics?

And then there’s the sex. First time for Ali in 3 years - is that relevant? And on a stakeout with possible violent (“they use guns, often, without provocation”) gangbangers, they masturbate each other in the car!

I suppose I had better read the next chapter to see if HStoner is just parodying a detective story he once read, or if it’s for “real”.