All Comments on 'Object of Desire Ch. 01'

I absolutely loved every minute of it! It must have slipped through the cracks not to have received many more appreciative comments. It is very well written. I love the back and forth between her thoughts and his. His nervousness is endearing. Her abandon is wonderful to read.<br><br>

I LOVED IT.

...amazingly well written...I'm kinda new to this site, just perusing and this is a definite re-read...intimate and forbidden and tender and lustfully delicious...I loved it! Will be looking for more and hopefully learning from your style as I learn to pen my own...be well and thank you again for a great story...

The back-and-forth between He and She works very well in this story (not so in most others). Good character development and plot make for a lovely story, which is really more of a Romance than anything else. Five stars.