All Comments on 'Office Sluts Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Grammar, grammar, grammar. Please learn it!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 10 years ago
What's not to like?

Other than the overtime, the sex might be as good as the pay. Interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
After you commented on my story I decided to take a look at yours

Congratulations. You were more detailed.

I could have been more passionate, less boring, and used better grammar.

sandymonroesandymonroealmost 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks to everyone!

BoxesAndBladesBoxesAndBladesover 9 years ago

Does this office have any vacancies? ;)

Nice story: liked the anal and facial, and the set-up with Bonnie and the main character.

Off to read the next one now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
under developed/incomplete....

good start, nice "picture painting". Well done. However once the overtime hour hit, things rushed to the sex and then ended. Did "the Idiot" handle the email and get it stamped?

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