All Comments on 'Office Sluts Ch. 02'

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pentheswordpentheswordalmost 11 years ago
Please edit!

The story would be so much better with proper spelling and grammar. There are volunteer editors out there (I'm one). Please consider using one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good premise for the chapter

Hope our hero gets to fuck Bonnie's pussy and ass and deposit full loads of sperm in both holes. Bonnie does ass-to-mouth.

sandymonroesandymonroealmost 11 years agoAuthor
to you hopes of Bonnie doing wild stuff

Belive me, she will :)

Sman4444Sman4444almost 3 years ago

I knew I should have gone to more team building!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Why would Helen giving out blowjobs make her a whore? It doesn’t she’s enjoying what’s going on and it’s all consensual … it’s well written but the ideas are dated.

Tess (uk)

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