All Comments on 'Old Man Takes Virgin Indian Girl'

Great story hun, your versatility continues to astound me. 3 very different stories, in 3 different categories. Amazing. As per usual I was hot and wet mess by the end of the story. Keep it up xxx

Hot story! You are brilliant!

Why I loved your first 2 stories that it didn't involve the wacc or the high class girl -low class ugly man - rape trope which is the most common thing in lit indian authors.

But even you could not resist writing a similar one . I'm not telling the story is bad, the setting and circumstances are so good but you have a talent in one thing but you are writinh the same cookie cutter stories .

Please take in my advice for next time.

I published them under the name "madiha Agarwal " 6 yrs ago in iss , along with my story of "my first onsite adventure".

I recently discovered this website and took the help of volunteer editors to publish it in here after iss went down .

Yes my stories were blatantly copied on xossip and other websites without my permission.

May be a copy which is claimed by a member of this site, but please don't confront. Now please publish a multiple chapter basis family saga in which family members will marry each other. Mix it with fetishism like sweaty hairyarmpit, lactation, pregnancy, pissing etc.

I have become a fan of your stories . Out of the four landlord , onsite adventure and beggar I liked your onsite adventure. It looked more real. But just one correction. You said once you go black you never come back. it should be go back. Because once you go black you will always come back for it . Maybe you should edit the words.

Can u make another story like this?!!

This story is so hot. I hope she goes back to the old man years later(just for another one night stand), but widowed old man takes the girl forcefully chained so that she can bear his baby...

This part is unnecessary for a non consent story since she was going to be raped:

"I didn't know why but my body was betraying me. Despite my repulse, I was getting hotter as he kept sucking, changing from one breast to the other. While sucking, he brought down his hand and put it inside the saree. Since I wasn't wearing any panties, he was able to access my sex directly. The moment he touched my pussy, I felt an electric surge inside me. He was gently rubbing on my clit. Already I was aroused by his sucking, but as soon as he started rubbing my pussy, I was moaning freely. Nothing seemed to matter anymore; my age, family, society, personal choice, nothing at all. I just needed to get fucked, this night, by this ugly old man, in his wreck of a house."

You rape or don't rape. It's not for the weak. The rest is bullshit!

ok, i guess...

Wow