All Comments on 'Older BBW & Hung Red Head'

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mrstanleymrstanleyalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Modified Story From Fetish Category

Hope you enjoy story. Working real hard on grammar and editing. Found about a dozen errors on fetish story. Fixed the typos and grammar. Been working hard on description of action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

The convo between the two characters was somewhat stilted and mechanical. They were also both a bit too Mary Sue for my liking.

fuckkedsfuckkedsover 4 years ago

God, do I love a thong sandal story.this is similar to many I've done. Right on.PS I own like 100 pair of thong sandals,gladly trade wirh Jill and Franny.

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Retired military member. Happily married to sexy Mature BBW into oral sex, deep throat, fucking, pussy eating, toe sucking, thong sandals, kinky sex. Have pierced penis. PA. I incorporate many of my experiences into stories. I write Mature, BBW, Fetish and Transexual s...