by mrstanley
Hope you enjoy story. Working real hard on grammar and editing. Found about a dozen errors on fetish story. Fixed the typos and grammar. Been working hard on description of action.
The convo between the two characters was somewhat stilted and mechanical. They were also both a bit too Mary Sue for my liking.
God, do I love a thong sandal story.this is similar to many I've done. Right on.PS I own like 100 pair of thong sandals,gladly trade wirh Jill and Franny.