All Comments on 'One Night Together'

Very well written with good sex scenes, dialog and emotions. You captured the lawyers mind and reasoning very well in the discussion about how the marriage would work, but I don't think it is going to last. I say that because you left the impression that sex with Justin was not as good as she just experienced for this one night and that is always going to be in her head.

Thanks for the compliments Sidney, and I had considered writing this also from Olivia's point of view or as an omniscient. I have my own ideas about what she wants and is looking for, but I think I'd want to leave her thoughts and where things would go as an exercise to the reader.

Relationships are complicated. Fantasies are simple, but each of our own individual fantasies can go in as many directions as each of us would want to take them.

It looks like there are latent feelings between them and I wonder where they would be some years later on. ;-)

Btw *****