All Comments on 'One Week with Mr. Hansen Ch. 04'
by lily_ann
- 37 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoShe got what she deserved and they got what they needed. Yay Jenny! I knew I liked that slut! Lol!Keep this yummy fantasy going without getting corny and too cliched and I'll be a happy camper. Thanks!
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe spanking certainly was in order. Claire had allowed herself to be turned into an eclair (pumped full of creme) in the previous chapter.
The forced BJ seemed out of character. Plus, it is self-serving. Punishments work better if they are, or seem to be, unselfish. If the punisher receives pleasure indirectly or later, that's something else.
The relationship between Claire and her "daddy" is sweet.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI loved it...as usual. I can't wait to see what happens when she goes home after school! Geez, I'm still panting!
Romantic1over 15 years agoGreat story thread. You could go on for ages with this ... and I hope you do. I look forward to many more episodes.
Anonymousover 15 years agobut it was Mr H who fucked up. He tells her to go out and enjoy herself then throws the toys from the pram when she comes home. Jammy sod only tells her the rules afterwards, Made for a very hot punishment game so hey ho. Good effort. Thanks. UK Cynic.
RossDanielsover 15 years agoI love the characters and love the way you've described every naughty moment of their relationsip. Keep those chapters cumming, er coming.
Anonymousover 15 years agoReally, I may need medication. That having been said, don't stop!
Kellizaberover 15 years agoThis series has been so amazing so far. You have great ideas and you write so well. Keep going!
Anonymousabout 15 years agolily-ann - I loved this story and can't wait for Chapter 5. This was so hot - I wish I had a family friend like Mr. Hanson. Keep writing!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThese are seriously the best stories ever! I get so horny when I read them and I love that they're long stories. I don't ever want their week to end! I especially love the mix of pain and pleasure. Thank you for these! All of them are beyond 5 stars!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI'm a huge lit fan and come here often without commenting on the stories I read. But you have to know that I have been wet the entire time I read this story... Please don't stop now!!!
blondegrlover 12 years agoFirst read this story a couple of years ago. I love it and check back every so often for an update. Please add more chapters. I really want to know what else happens. I try to fill in the rest myself, but my imagination is nowhere near as good as your writing. Thank you for this story though, even though it isn't finished. It is wonderful!
Dark_Stormover 9 years ago...that the author chose not to finish this wonderful story. It's not the first unfinished tale I've run into on Lit and I'm sure it won't be the last.
mazzmealmost 9 years agoA truly well written erotic saga that has a enticing buildup and well developed storyline! This author uses a extensive attention to detail to bring the characters to life for the reader and keep them craving more... Finding it difficult to tear away from.
k36ddover 7 years agoI just want to express my gratitude for a great series and how I hope there is a Chapter 5.
Seachantalmost 7 years agoAwesome stories, totally pictured myself with a neighborhood girl I've crushed on..
lost track of how many times I rubbed one out to your work.
You're a hell of a writer lily_Ann, you write things like this, and I can't help but wonder how much fun you must be in real life..
I can't wait for # 5 😜
Anonymousabout 6 years agoYou are a fabulous writer, the sex is hot and the story is sweet. Please please finish the story!!!
maxsteele5 months agoI was wondering if we can just get a conclusion for this, and then you can post your new stuff that you say is different because your writing style has changed.
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