All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 07'

another perfect chapter of your wonderful story i look forward to each and every chapter and was so glad to see i had posted today thank you much can not wait for the next one

This is one story I stalk the boards daily for - and I'm giddily happy to have found this before my head hit the pillows!

In each nex chapter questions are answered and more are brought to fore - WHO would abandon a wee Were in the world and care of humans with nothing to aide him or stand for him? Will the Bouchards leave well enough alone? Though I have NO doubts that Alexander will sail through his first MOON change, Will Dimitri and the other Elder Alphas arrive intime to help him prepare?

Guess I'll just have to wait around the NEW boards and see!

This story's pace is very relatable, as are ALL of the characters - thanks sooooo much for giving us such an entertaining tale!

~moonstruck~

Great chapter! I love the pace you are moving things along and the great characters you have given us. I cannot wait to see how things develop.

Keep up the great work.

I love the way that you are telling this story and look for new episodes all the time. It is definitely the best story of its kind that I have read. Keep going! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

very nice update. i like how he's so accepting over everything, probably accepting his wolf without realizing it.

update soon i wanna read more.. this story has me checking every day for updates.. this is quickly becoming a favorite story of mine.. cant wait till the next update... sounds to me like their is another alpha on the way.. he has it all brains, military training and sounds like hes gonna be one huge wolf.

Beautiful!

I knew it was a matter of time before the Bouchards acted. I just wish he would of killed the other wolf (but that would be too easy.) Jenabel and Alexander will more than likely need help controlling thier 'needs.' I love how the story is progressing. Please keep this story going.

Wonderful and exciting with a beautiful build up! Can't wait for what you dream up next. I like the conflict you've added. The danger adds something to the story!

Another well crafted story, I look forward to more.

Just another outstanding chapter. The story has kept me so hooked I am checking everyday for another chapter.. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing your talent with us.

I love that they will be each other's firsts. I just love this story.

Simply beautiful.

Keep up the good work.

Please!

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I enjoy the way you tell your story differently then most were stories. It is both intriguing and beautiful at the same time. I am anxious to read more of this story. Please post another few chapters soon.

this has been an amazingly written story, Vjax!!! I am waiting for the next chapter as patiently as I can...lol...which I'm not a patient person!! Please post the next chapter soon!! Thank you!!! :)

Great job on the chapter. I look forward to the next and hope it will quickly get to the part where he has to change by the end of it. I liked the scene where he's attacked and sees his wolf in his mind. I like how you layered all this with the question of who his parents were and the potential problem it could be that he was left alone and could have revealed their kind. I guess they should consider whether his parents could have died but even if so, could they have lived without a pack? You'll have to cover all the possibilities. Does his latent wolf possibly come from only being half wolf or did both parents have to be wolves? I continue to particularly like Willow's apparent connection with him or the sense she gets about him and his wolf. Hope you have more of that.

Keep it comin!

but there are proof reading errors in every chapter including some real howlers in this one. your exotic Swedish glade has been corrected to Glance...twice!

Beautiful

Why is Cross always skirting around the edges but not being part of the story? Is there a purpose for his character?

Its a bit ,wishy washy but still good. the action scene was awesome.

JC

I tried to give you 5 stars, but only 4 lit up!

Definitely a 5 star chapter!