All Comments on 'Our Family Physician Ch. 01'

loved this story...cant wait for more to cummmmmmmmm

Excellent story line, good character development. Keep writing!

You had me hard for most of it. Well written and sensual.

Really a great read. got me wet and excited very quickly with the detailed lead-in. Loved the fact you've got three "regular people" rather than the often written supermodel bodies or that sort of thing. I wondered if this wasnt a real experience perhaps? Hairs visible on Susan's tush was so "normal." hope ya come back soon with a second chapter!

I loved it, what more is to cum?

What a great story it almost felt as you were there watching, loved it. keep writing more like this

This story was quite good, although I found one small problem, per se'. It was a little on the long side. Then, again, when you go into detail, it has a tendacy of being that way. Either way, keep writing and I'll certainly keep reading.

I don't use beautiful to comment on a story but that's what your story was, just beautiful in every way.

What a fantastic story. Thank you for your perspective. I throughly enjoyed reading it. Hopefully, a return encounter will take place. This should result in an relationship that will last for years to come.

I enjoyed Your mindset!