All Comments on 'Our Family Vacation Ch. 01'

Though there was no incest in this chapter, I assume that there will be in future chapters. For the upcoming chapters, I would strongly recommend getting an editor or a proofreader. The multiple spelling, grammar and sentence structure errors made this chapter difficult to read.

44DD of course they are. Stopped reading at that point. Could of been a decent story, but the usual bullshitting always spoils any chance for a decent story. Wish people would learn that only 1.2% of men are over 7.5" and less than 5% of women are more than a 36DD. Do the research online if you don't believe it.

Hope the story adds more excitement.

Ok one of the most annoying g comments I see on here is people complaining about authors making dicks and tits too big. I will say this most of the women I know are at least a big C cup as bir dick sizes well other then my own couldn't tell ya but who really gives a shit it's a fantasy make things as big or little as you want

If I could make a suggestion, always finish at least one story line in a submission. You have just given us a tease--which will be OK if you finish tomorrow, but like we both know, it's awful easy to get distracted by another project. You have many ways you could take this, but you have to take it...

Don't misunderstand, it's fine to start another story line in this one and leave us with a cliff hanger.

The 44 up top just means she has a large torso. The bra strap is the 44. The bra cup is the DD. It’s the DD that’s impressive if that is important to you. Guys or girls are happy with their partner being B or C if it’s their hands or mouth that is on them. Just saying. Apples or grapefruits paint the same picture. Take the time to paint the shape or how they sit and nipple descriptions help. You stopped too soon.

I hope you get to the road trip in the next chapter and some incest sex.

Continue it.I like family story most with some kinky & fetish activities.Being an Indian I always explore indian shy & name type characters with conservative & religious attitude.

i hope there's a little more story the next few chapters. a nice tease to start, however.

Your mother is 44. Jack is 18 turning 19. She had jack at the start of her senior year of high school. So the mom was 25 or 26 when she started her senior year of high school. Your mother should be 36 or 37.

You may want to reread the line you are referring to; she has 44 double Ds, not she is 44 years old.

WTF! Also 44DDs???? What is this obsession with back-breaking tits?

Your editor sucks.