All Comments on 'Our Parties'

Sorry, but that story felt as though it had been assembled from a kit, and the dialogue came across as particularly by the numbers.

like your last commentator should stay at home and play with themselves. As usual it was signed "anonymous", which is a pseudonym for "I don't want anyone to know who I am because I am a prat".

I enjoyed every word, and throughout I had replaced the husband with myself. Please write about more parties and let me know when you do, so that I may be sure to read them

Good, but could have been better. Perhaps one or two of these women were fucking other guys because they wanted a baby and their husband(s) were not of the Seed origin variety? Which would have made this story much more erotic.

This is the perfect sexual fantasy very well written. Like the effect of getting deeper and deeper and more and more involved as the story moves to the perdictable conclusion. Still very hot and enjoyable to read.

Could have been me and mine. I remember parties like this in the early 70's. One run by the WI (no kidding) had 11 out of 12 with no bra, 3 with tights (ugh!) 4 without and 5 with stockings. And I found out 3 didn't wear anything. Getting past the giggle strip to a naked vulva meant you took a sharp intake of breath, rather than laughing

I remember going to a parties like that with my wife in the seventies. At one,the hosts wife had her hand down my trousers and I had my finger in her pussy while we danced with the lights down, however, my wife would not be in it with the host and we all went home frustrated. I did not even get a fuck when we got home. Come to think of it, I never got much from her anyway. Swinging parties were not rare in those days. Still a very good story.

I remember going to a parties like that with my wife in the seventies. At one,the hosts wife had her hand down my trousers and I had my finger in her pussy while we danced with the lights down, however, my wife would not be in it with the host and we all went home frustrated. I did not even get a fuck when we got home. Come to think of it, I never got much from her anyway. Swinging parties were not rare in those days. Still a very good story.

The identity of the couple in the bedroom was telegraphed well ahead, and the story would have benefited from longer descriptive passages (perhaps with the p.o.v. switching to Julie, telling us how she got on with her guest cock?), but it's effective as a set-up for what I see is now a series.

Great Intro to what could be a great series. Please write more longer chapters.