by khukusanyal
Good God. You write very well indeed. A must read for the all the randy people.
I'm hoping English is not your first language. I only looked at the first parargraph then got annoyed because of some really stupid uses of words. I mean "after using water for personal hygiene" and "after reaching back", wtf is that?
Dear writer truly saying thats the best story i have ever read the way in which u narrate your story is excellent coz ur story picks speed slowly; means not all the action in one night keep on writing really a good work (Y)
What a great story. It really captures the languange used and the sensibilities of Bengal in India. And the story is HOT. In so far as English is concerned. I see a comment asking whether the writer's first langauage is English!!! IT is her first language, as much as it is to common people in USA, Cockneys, Australia. WE can not look for queens english in porn, dear!!
An Indian context is good.
A regional context better!
You are authentic indeed...
Your stories give awesome reading pleasure. The attention to detail is worth praising.