All Comments on 'Owned Pt. 01'

Very flattered at the dedication! Thank you. As ever, an incredible piece of F/m story-telling. You write the pegging/.sub anal scenes so beautifully.

awesome start can not wait for more. WOW

Very well written story. Hope for more to come.

Your writing is convincing. For Instance, in this story we have Franklin. Franklin in and of itself is not a compelling name. It's generic enough, but as we read about Franklin and learn more about him this mental picture begins to form of him. His kinks and desires change that nothingness into something tangible. In this case, a little self discovery and lust? But how far is 'Franklin' willing to go? The other thing is I like your stories because of your pen name, soppingwetpanties. Dang, doesn't that just sound nasty? Thanks for the entertainment.

Heavenly, an answer to what i have always hoped to be, can’t wait for The Party ~

With Obedience Always,

boy charlton

Excellent story! Very well written.

Great start, can't to see where you take this story

Great start, really erotic and engaging. Can't wait to read about the party.

Wonderful erotic story! I am Franklin in every way ready to be owned and used in submission & servitude the rest of my life my Goddess. Thank you!

your pretty boy, aslutboi

Good premise.

Erotic.

Too bad her breasts weren't involved.

Five stars.

Brilliant, well written

Superb, extremely well written. Also very erotic and felling very real. 5 Stars

It's know wonder all the team members were disappointed to be left out of their Mistresses weekend (!)

Indeed you own many of us now...

this is your best work so far....develop it slowly...make it last

Good character development. However, one of my pet peeves in fem dom stories is the use of derogative and degrading name calling. I don’t think it’s necessary for her to call him “fucktoy” in dominating him. He has agreed to be her slave, she should just refer to him as that.