All Comments on 'Peter Ch. 02'

This story is rather all over the place. you need to settle on one these, one story line

I've heard many reviews of Rod Stewart. Professional was never used. Energetic, powerful, sure but professional? That's why he's Rod Stewart, and you're not.

This could have been a much better story had the author not rushed through it.

Again I say, the author really needs an editor / proofreader.

But it is meant to be a wanking story and few readers really care about the structure or grammar .