All Comments on 'Phantom'

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FredricaForeverFredricaForeverover 18 years ago
Loved it!

Bravo. Encore, Encore! And happy all hallows eve to all. :)

bearleebearleeover 18 years ago
Great Story!

I don't get to this category much-almost never really, but if this is an example of the writing here and the story themes, I'll guess I'll have to make it more often!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Spooky

ghostly fun, I love a story that sinks into you and doesn't let go. This was one of them. I hope you write more excellent tales like this one.

Beam_of_liteBeam_of_liteover 18 years ago
Watching

Loved the whole story..but I must say my favorite part was when Crystal was standing on the mezzanine watching..Hummmm

sybilrosesybilroseover 18 years ago
Thats Twice

Only you MF could get me to read this paticular Genre. Loved it !

Sexy and spooky !

David LockleyDavid Lockleyover 18 years ago
There is no such thing.............

As a typical MF, but this is typically MF.

You're the man, always take me there..

Thanks, Buddy

Dave

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I like the way you added a flair of Poe, at the end, the 'that...and nothing more." from The Raven

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