All Comments on 'Photos in the Evening'

do more these are the best stories there are to read

Well written. Got me off very nicely.

sexy!

Do you realize how embarrassing it was to have to take my keyboard in and have it fixed after shorting it out with the load you made me shoot?!?!?

this is one of the few stories that's too short.

it started out slowly (I grew up in San Diego and have been to Seatle or I could easily imagine the trajectory mother and son took, moving from their beautiful native San Diego, which is sunny year round, to beautiful, rainy Seatle), so perfectly "normal", loving, and family-liked and then quickly catapulted to pure raw unadulterated eroticism of major proportions,,, but still stayed within a certain pure, innocent, and, well, very family oriented way! lol

again, it's incredibly erotic --- the sexual acts/descriptions were nowhere as crude/explicit or ubiquitous as others --- because it is about private, contained EMOTIONS and THOUGHTS two people have for and about each other that NO ONE ELSE in the universe had access to, indeed, emotions and thoughts for which no one else exist or matter!, because it is totally theirs and totally special to each of them; and they do it only for each other,,, here and now,,,

excellent job, dear author; don't let anyone else tell you otherwise.

you could see the discomfort/pulpation of both (though the mom pretended to be tough and witty), when he said,

"More? [asking his mom to reveal more skin for the camera]"

and she said,

"Is that a question... or a direction? [directive]"

and, towards the end,,,

"Understand one thing – nobody else can know about this. This has to be our secret. Always."

"Does that mean we can do it again?"

Patricia glanced over at her son and smiled.

"I'm glad you asked. It kept me from having to suggest it."

THAT was as precious and erotic as it was witty! Thanks author; job very well done. It's a short story that whether you stroke to or not, it's still an incredibly erotic and loving story,,,,

KEEP WRITING

as you can read from the comments made. I think it was perfectly crafted and well thought out. Can't add much to the outstanding comments.

Normally, I do not care for mother/son incest stories. Most are too predictable. I read this one because of the rating it had already received.

I have to agree wholeheartedly with the other comments made. I not only found the story beleivable, but erotic and witty as well.

Please continue with your writings.

NOTE: To the commenter with the sticky keyboard problems. Buy a waterproof keyboard cover.

pls continue this story

is it possible to get her pregnate

more then once from her son

You gave great detail of mother-son sex. I was thoroughly aroused by it. Thank you. I enjoyed it.

good story

great! future reluctant pregnant

great stuff....both the characters, particularly the mom's is deeply sexy

thank you for your story, I enjoyed it very much. You should write more :)

I would love to have given my mother one when I was younger.. so now I'm screwing my 19 year old Stepdaughter.. She loves older cock in all her holes and loves to swallow.. Not a drop is spilled

My mom has never been shy about her beautiful body, especially around, her teen son. She and I have been lovers for over 2 years now, and have Dad's approval. Mom loves to suck my cock and anal sex whenever the mood hits, and Dad loves to watch and send pix to Grandma and his brother. Mom keeps her pussy waxed, which makes for good eating. Incest has been a part of our family tradition for a generation. Dad took my sister's virginity when she reached puberty, and my grandfather took my mom's when she was 13.

This is an excellent very well-written story of hot motherfucking by an author who was around 30 when he composed it. So Mr. Hatcher was still enthralled, as young men are, by the notion of a boy plugging his stiff prick up his own mother's cunt. Mike is a testosterone-fueled 18 years old, blessed with a real big teenage dick and a pair of balls to match, balls that have to be emptied a few times a day. His sex-savvy mother is delighted by her boy's young male equipment, thrilled by "the sight of her grown son, fully aroused and loaded with seed." Mike is sporting the biggest fattest cock his mommy's ever seen, and her motherly heart melts just like her motherly cunt drips like crazy. Mom wants and NEEDS her boy's big stiff prick stuffed up her wet twat, which Mike thinks is a pretty neat idea. Nothing's ever felt as good to Mike as his dick stuffed up his mommy's tight wet twat, and it doesn't take long for the boy to shoot amazing doses of his potent young seed up the cunt where his creamy sperm belongs---his own dear mother's! All the thousands or tens of thousands or maybe many more sons who've cum up their mother's cunt---their own fucken birth canal, oh, MAN!---know exactly how young Mike feels.

good shit

If there is more to come, please don't add anyone else. Let it stay Mom / Son fucking there brains out, and Mom getting knocked up. What a lucky kid, with his Dads camera and his Moms pussy. .....................NICE READ

where is part 2? mom could do her first anal

You did that one very well, please write many more like that.

Good story though I'm tired of every dick being a huge monster, its unrealistic.

They both must have been warmed up before the pictures were taken,no one gets going that fast. And this kid with his huge cock, that mom just noticed ha!! ha!!. good read but think it over. THANKS

Great way of getting them into an intimate situation, perhaps a glass of wine should have been involved? Thanks for sharing