by redzinger
Definitely want more of this well-written and absorbing story. Strong character development draws one in. Now you need to tell us the rest of the stories. Please.
Short & Sharp.
A well-told tale with a bit of a twist.
Thank you
HP
I was half expecting someone to grab a room and start making babies, but heck. This works too. Can't shake that feeling of being deprived of that extra contact under the blanket, or a few more moments worth of kisses. Either way; A story worth staying up late for. Now let's check out what else you have...
Well done - thoroughly rounded characters, believable plot and HEA on its way.
Thank you
i just have two issues with this story. the snowball war needed to be longer. and more kisses. lots more kisses. but i just love good stories like this. a good wholesome story is always a good find. so thank you for a very well written story.