All Comments on 'Pleasure with Driver Ch. 01'

Very predictable repetition, need to improve english a lot if you want to continue writting in english. And please try to build up the plot a bit.

Good start dude, but you need to flesh the story out a bit (pun intended). There is not one single line of dialog - its like a newspaper account rather than a real story. Too rushed.

Please keep writing more frequently.

It was good for an Indian reader. dont bother about westeners' negative comments.

Good beginning - hoping it gets spicier!