by Goldeniangel
Just to remember an old adage my great great grand pappy told me ... all good things come to those who wait... in this day of aids and disease I'm sure she can get ahold of some hiv positive blood to give to her nice cousin and todd yeah he deserves to die also... a litle tainted blood suggest you have aids also give it to them let them worry about the consequences ..kill them slow ...ah but revenge is sweet ...youre a bright person work on it man i vote 3 for effort... good revenge I'll do 5
What do you mean, revenge? No way. This is not a story about revenge. This is about how a stuck up girl didn't accept a loss gracefully, and is being punished for this. My bet is Todd has an extra copy that he'll keep for himself. Plus another one he'll give Chad.
Pretty good stor if I could just get incest stuff outta my head. I still like the "Poker loser" story as a whole.
If more girls (women) were like Allison, pain & pleasure, the world would be a better place for both women and men.
Incest? This isn't incest. Unrelated step-cousins. My Mother, my sister...that's incest. Try to be a little less judgemental. Who is to say what's right, what's wrong.
As an author, Allison, you write one hell of a story...I like your alias, Goldeniangel, also. Fantasizing is fun and harmless...as long as your aware it is only fantasy.
All my love.
Really enjoying this story except this chapter, something about adding Chad again just doesn't sit right
I'm sad that this chapter got heavily cut from the novelization of Poler Loser, but as always am glad I can find it right here on Lit. Great work as always love.
And the psychological training goes on.
Sad that the body is such a traitor at times. Of course that's what Todd and Chad are bargaining on. Her mind is well on the way to becoming accustomed to the pain and humiliation. Looking forward to reading how this process proceeds. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.