All Comments on 'Post-Noir: The Return of Light'

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KinPAKinPAover 2 years ago

Thank you...Ian need this closure.

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesover 2 years ago

Great job having Ian regain himself after such a terrible loss! Many of your readers (like me) may have had a terrible loss in their life of their perfect loved one and needed this reminder that all is not lost.

Thank you.

Keep up your great work! Continue this leg of the story for another chapter or 2 please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hold up..Paula got whipped a month before she took the Jamaica trip but Ian only saw the whip marks after the tragic shootings?????.....

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

That was when the nurse walked in…. And noticing the naked couple in love and all ready for sex decided that she too could do with some excitement during her work that day. With that she closed the curtain behind her and asked “May I join the both of you?” ;-)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This was/is a great story. I wish you could continue, but all things must end. I just get so wrapped up in your characters that I never want the stories to end.

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