All Comments on 'Private Beach'

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RubthedubRubthedubabout 14 years ago
Keep on writing ....

Great start, looking forward to the next installment!!

BshavenBshavenabout 14 years ago
nice

Very erotic start, i can't wait to read more.

kasperozkasperozabout 14 years ago
Very Good

Can't wait for the next instalment, Well written and structured. Good to see great aussie talent at work

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mmmm

This is really hot. I can't wait to read part two. I can almost taste Andy's hard shaft now!

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