All Comments on 'Priya: Journey of a Shy Girl Ch. 01'

by rahul_agrawal

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
This

should not be in this category,she is not a wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
32A?

A 32A cup size doesn't translate into full, heavy breasts...

rahul_agrawalrahul_agrawalalmost 17 years agoAuthor
Wait. Have patience.

This is meant to be a long story. This is the start. For those Indians who want to see hot Indian words, they should try freesexyindians.com where this story has been posted in its Indian version. Priya will get married soon. If you read the note in the beginning of the story, it clearly says that it is a story about evolution from a shy girl to a slut-wife.

charms75charms75almost 17 years ago
Good Plot

This is a good plot and can be developed well. You need to prove she is really shy and traditional. Here Priya is shown more as a modern girl than shy and traditional.

Also to be in this category the first part of the novel must include her marriage and may be the first night's sex too.

Hope you take the time to revise the story and repost it.

Much Love

Charms

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
masturbation

priya doesnt know how to relieve herself??

Girls know how to masturbaten from very early childhood, moment they are aware of clitoris,,even if they donot actually know what it means. Its natural.

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