by SirSinn
I have been following this story since part one. I love it! I like the turn things have taken. Maybe in the next installment the story can be a longer than two pages. Good job!!!!!
Personally I am a fan of impregnation and harems, and that would obviously increase my enjoyment, but there is something to the whole coxville curse story that lacks closure. Maybe more declarations of submission and less wavering about sluttishness would help, but regardless this is great writing and I hope you can make a powerful ending with the four chapters of setup.
While your description of the sex scene isn't as good as Stormbringer (you're good but his scene are longer and dirtier) this story is fantastic. The only thing I don't like with Stormbringer is the lack of lesbianism (even though his women are slut for BBC and which man doesn't like two girls going at it) and incest (Jenny and Kitty Summers would be so hot together).
So your story is a very welcome to his universe.