by JRob
So very erotic, but also different. Can't wait to see if something's nag else happens. More please. Pretty please.
he should have turned her over the desk and fucked her as soon as he got thru spanking her ass
The excursus about his wife's mom coming to visit did not have to do with the title nor the theme of the story. That strand did not go anywhere (eg. were his fears about her impending visit realized?). So it was useless.
The palaver back-and-forth with his wife was a little more interesting, and could probably have been made some kind of backdrop to the focus -- the interplay with the co-ed. However, that thread was also dropped without follow-through (eg. did his wife keep her deal?). More wasted words.
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Paul in Oklahoma