All Comments on 'Pyaasi Bhabhi Pt. 04'

write something in english too... you've got good imagination.... gonna read others in the series now... any chance of threesomes?

I have no problem with someone posting in another language. Frankly, I'd prefer it to someone who doesn't speak English trying to writing in English. What I DO have a problem with is the insistance on posting the tag line in English when the story is not. It's misleading.

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So, softdominant699, post in your language, but post the tag line in the same language. If you don't you really don't have any right to be upset when people comment on the language. It's false advertisement.

I'm an Indian and i found the story interesting but false tags are definitely not welcome... otherwise hot story...

hott..mera lund khada kr diya

mera lund bhi khara ho gaya