All Comments on 'Quickies: Ultimate Deception'

No, this is NOT trash. This is a relatively realistic review of how evil takes over a person. Most men are defenseless against such women. The only escape is early avoidance.

That is why Proverbs says, Ch7,

21With her enticing speech she caused him to yield,

With her flattering lips she seduced him.

22Immediately he went after her, as an ox goes to the slaughter,

Or as a fool to the correction of the stocks,[a]

23Till an arrow struck his liver.

As a bird hastens to the snare,

He did not know it would cost his life.

24Now therefore, listen to me, my children;

Pay attention to the words of my mouth:

25Do not let your heart turn aside to her ways,

Do not stray into her paths;

26For she has cast down many wounded,

And all who were slain by her were strong men.

27Her house is the way to hell,

Descending to the chambers of death.

Great story... too bad some people take it too seriously... I would love to read another chapter.

...Cheers. My wife needs a friend like this.

You need to add a few more chapters to this hot, hot story. Does Summer make a daddy out of you. I noted that she was making her boyfriend use a condom, but she let you go barebacked into her. A little bit of that and someone's tummy starts to grow?

Since the wife is to stupid to see what s going on (remember her BEST !! friend did it once before !!) i think she is entitled to become their slave !!

Lex

Hot story, doing it behind the wifey's back sounds super exciting, need more.

Awesome! These people don't know what they're talking about...I loved it!!!....Please write more chapters

Great Story....Dont Stop here....continue their affair....

Much improved over the last one. This could work into a neighbor, secretary, mother-in-law, etc. Priscilla was still the best

Best wedding day story that I have ever read.

i wish if i was this lucky. is there anyone out there...? please meet me babe.... cum to me & cum for me..

Very erotic. Summer needs to become a mommy from you.

What a great read, the wife seems totally oblivious to it all.

I wonder if a later chapter it could be twisted, that she does in fact know whats going on?

I loved it - keep it up, it can only get better!

I always like a story about forbidden desires. And you did a great job with it.

All i can say its PATHETIC!

All i can say is that its PATHETIC!!

I think Anonymous in India has his panties on too tight! This is as hot as hell and I wish you would bring us something new as all your stories are damn good. I love these evil seductive women.

Seductive women are great! How aboout a follow up! Maybe June finds out and cuckolds him? Or perhaps Summer and June make love?

Great story - got me off good and proper. Love the no-nonsense cut to the chase style. Keep em coming!

There could be many follow-ups of this great story.

She is sick and twisted....sounds like me :)

I thought I was going to lose my mind reading about how hot and evil she is and how good it felt to give in. I hope to read more!

Is this real ?

Seems as if you love your wifes bestfriend more than her ?...

What a great plot, there are some women just like Summer, and plenty of men just like him, what a good read. I'm looking for more following this up

I really hope that this affair is just a friction. An affair that only occurs in fantasy but not reality. If not, I would have felt sorry for the wife. Nevertheless, it's a great story!

P.S: I came twice while reading it and imagine the scene using my vibrator. It's so good and so hot! But still, I hope it's just a story.

you should continue this story

So much hotter if the wife witnessed it

I want to vomit. What a bitch & what a cheating bastard! I think June should slap their faces with shit in her hand..

From June's perspective (mostly), needless to say... Hot.

Nobody is that stupid. Truly awful writing.

My wife Lorraines maid of honor was a school teacher from her school, Kate, 8 years older than me. She had been around to our home only a few times, at 35, every time I saw her she was dressed in her school teachers clothes, not that that was bad, pencil skirt, nylons, great well shaped ass, but flat chested and a plain face. And it was that plain face that my cock was being sucked by on my wedding day after she cornered me and told me how much my wife bragged about my cock, told me how she said I tried to put it in her ass but she stopped me and that was my gift from her, something my wife would not do, if your up for it, come and get me and I watched as her ass moved away. I was now married, I was supposed to change, but that ass, I knew I shouldn't. She walked back, stopped, not much time left and walked down the hallway to the bathrooms, I failed the test, that's why I was in the handicapped bathroom, her lips around my cock. She stood, turned, lifted her tight dress, no panties, you want it, lick it, I buried my face between her bottom, savoring the taste, the odour, fuck my cock was hard her hole was slightly open, the tip of my tongue fitted into her opening. Come on, fuck me,i carefully positioned my cock, don't be scared, you wont be the first, maybe the biggest and she pushed back, her ass swallowing my cock all the way, tight, hot, I fucked her ass hard, fast and she took it my cum jetting up into her tight insides as she pushed back on me. Don't move, her hand was at her pussy and I felt her insides spasm around my cock.She leaned against the wall and I pulled out. She turned, held me, congratulations on your wedding to Lorraine and my ass, I will be seeing a lot of you. True to her word.

She is so evil. Homemade sin. Good writing, but bad reading. Talk about going to hell in a handbag...

This was the best story I had read on this site. Write a 3rd part too. Wish you keep on writing more parts to it.

God made man superior to women physically. God made woman superior to man intelligently. If you want great sex show your woman what you want; if you have the know how. If you aren't man enough then go ahead and use a slut. Even sluts are smarter than most men, unfortunately they still have to show you dumb asses what you want and how to do. Poor guys!

There's nothing hotter than breaking down and seducing a man who's pledged himself to another woman. All the better if you can get him to fuck you right under her nose!

Your plot is illogical. If June previously suspected her best friend of cheating with her old boyfriend, it is unlikely she would let her guard down enough that Summer would get close enough to her husband to cheat with him. Staging the first incident at their wedding was an obviously naive error made by someone lacking in both writing and life experience. Have you ever been to a wedding? It's a day dedicated to the bride and groom; if either were to go missing for a lengthy amount of time, it would definitely be noticed. Take a few writing classes and gain some maturity before you attempt to tackle your next story. Best of luck!

Loved the way this was done. Simple, horny, deviant sex - great.

Would love there to be more of this story line.

More of the same, but getting more dangerous/deviant.

Lightweight drunk wife, passed out/photo'd, drunk wife les/bdsm unknowing/unwilling, same with unknowing/unwilling anal, with BFF/husband both forcibly taking her. Slut BFF corrupting wife into guilty Les-wifeslut with groups of women (unknown to husband - spa/book club/amateur photography club (hardcore les porn - getting more extreme as the story develops)), etc etc

Loads could be done - enjoyed, cheers

I know it’s been years since you’ve written anything, but I would love an entire series on Summer and Greg. I just can’t get enough.

hmmmm, its been a long time so you probably dead now,,,,so screw it!! lololl.