All Comments on 'Raw and Broken Ch. 01'

I haven't even read it yet...but I'm sooooo excited that I had to say thank you for doing this. I hoped that in the future there might be a Christmas or baby special. A new book character and story line launch. Anything, just to see this characters in the next years, through joy and hardship. But you up upped it by doing Daphne's story instead. Okay. Big breathe. I'm going in.

I've read Malcolm's and Becca's story several times and always wondered what happened to drake and Daphne. Thank you so much for this! You are an awesome storyteller!

I'm soooo grateful you're back and sharing Daphne and Drake's story.

The beginnings of a quality story from a favorite author. While I appreciate the efforts of the many new or less polished authors posting here, it is a true pleasure to sit rapt at the feet of a master. Welcome back.

But so sad to see the editing of "Raw" when I came to re-read it a couple of weeks ago! However, this story has been hoped for by so many of us - and it does not disappoint. Am very much looking forward to reading the next three chapters. As always your writing is masterful.

Jules

I’ve just reread “Raw” and it was painfully obvious in that story that Drake was devolving into a controlling prick. Which is heartbreaking, he knew about the abuse she’d been through and yet he still made all the same mistakes. Communication is important in every relationship but along with trust it’s one of the cornerstones of BDSM. Drake’s character just proved the truth in the adage regarding power; power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely.

You are a gifted writer and I love your stories, now that I’ve rediscovered them I’ll go through all the mesh with my limits.

Thank you for sharing your ideas.

Tess (UK)