All Comments on 'Recycled Lingerie Ch. 01'

You do need to get an editor - you missed some very obvious errors when you checked you story.

eg Mandy is dead in the second paragraph; a few spelling mistakes eg Isla should be Islay and your grammar is not perfect.

Having got that off my chest, can I say that I thoroughly enjoyed the storyline and I look forward to more episodes. I just love lingerie stories!

I have finally found an editor. Saltysooner will be assisting me, and future revisions and chapters will give him credit.

There are a number of errors that are being fixed in a pending edit. A reread in a few days will be cleaner, and a full edit will be forthcoming.

Your work is among the best I have read in many years of Literotica. Yes, there are some grammatical errors but your stories are not only erotic but provide interesting adult reading. Thank you from an elderly reader.

I love this story. Still hoping you continue it.

I truly enjoyed your story and I look forward to reading part two.