by CharmingVixen
I love it!!Can't wait 2 c what happens next..so plssss don't let us wait too longg...thank U
the sex between these two is scorching, some of the hottest scenes I’ve read...I also love the way the characters are complex and interesting. This serie is absolutly engaging and I look forward to reading more from your talented writting,(please soon!)
it seems like too small a reason for her to not want to get involved- because her mother died and people you love die on you??? doesn't make much sense...if she had been hurt in the past by a guy who reminded her of Damien, that would make sense....
I think this one is the best serie at the moment on this website. It's superb,steamy,deeply emotional,hot...thank you and please chapter 3.
i HAVE to see what happens with this story! and future stories! PLEASE COME BACK! I LOVE YOUR WOOORDS
I really got pulled into the story, I need to know more!!! please come back, you are one of the best WRITERS
i hope you post the next chapter really soon..its too HOT to resist.
Love all your stories, but why is it that you never finish anyone of them? Please give all of them a good ending. PLEASE!!!
This is one of my favorite stories and I have been patiently waiting, when the next chapter coming?!?!?
This is the most amazing story I've ever read. And I've read quite a few, online and on paperback. Please write more. If you have any books published, please let me know!
I love your stories. Your style of writing, the characters. WOW.
Some of of these lines sound like what Bruno Tonioli would use , were he a writer. It breaks up the rhythm of reading when I can't help shaking my head at how forced some of the lines sound/read on the page.
Alpha males do rule!
This line just slay me: "People died, they left you with your love as a glaring reminder of all that you lost." Anyone who has experienced that pain understands immediately what Amethyst is so afraid of, and it couldn't be more elegantly said. I love your passion and insight. Thanks for making your work freely available to lucky readers like me.
I like your story and it's good and it is like a novel
It needs some editing but all in all very good writing and story line. I love strong females and alfa males. Love the power struggel.
A very good story. Full of lust and suspense. I enjoy the humor and where the story is going.