All Comments on 'Reluctant Pleasure Ch. 02'

by CharmingVixen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Superb

I love it!!Can't wait 2 c what happens next..so plssss don't let us wait too longg...thank U

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Absolutly brilliant!!

the sex between these two is scorching, some of the hottest scenes I’ve read...I also love the way the characters are complex and interesting. This serie is absolutly engaging and I look forward to reading more from your talented writting,(please soon!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great

it seems like too small a reason for her to not want to get involved- because her mother died and people you love die on you??? doesn't make much sense...if she had been hurt in the past by a guy who reminded her of Damien, that would make sense....

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
waiting... waiting

when do we get more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Next chapter NOW

The anticipation for the next chapter is killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
the best seri!!!!

I think this one is the best serie at the moment on this website. It's superb,steamy,deeply emotional,hot...thank you and please chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
please

your work is great, please go on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
:) :)

i HAVE to see what happens with this story! and future stories! PLEASE COME BACK! I LOVE YOUR WOOORDS

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More please!!

I really got pulled into the story, I need to know more!!! please come back, you are one of the best WRITERS

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
love it!

i hope you post the next chapter really soon..its too HOT to resist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Finish it

Love all your stories, but why is it that you never finish anyone of them? Please give all of them a good ending. PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Next chapter ASAP!!

This is one of my favorite stories and I have been patiently waiting, when the next chapter coming?!?!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

This is the most amazing story I've ever read. And I've read quite a few, online and on paperback. Please write more. If you have any books published, please let me know!

I love your stories. Your style of writing, the characters. WOW.

Dragonangel413Dragonangel413about 16 years ago
Quite Lovely...

It's a shame you haven't written anything new!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Deadly accuracy of a sniper

Some of of these lines sound like what Bruno Tonioli would use , were he a writer. It breaks up the rhythm of reading when I can't help shaking my head at how forced some of the lines sound/read on the page.

Alpha males do rule!

lusherlusherabout 13 years ago
love your writing

This line just slay me: "People died, they left you with your love as a glaring reminder of all that you lost." Anyone who has experienced that pain understands immediately what Amethyst is so afraid of, and it couldn't be more elegantly said. I love your passion and insight. Thanks for making your work freely available to lucky readers like me.

AlydenAlydenabout 13 years ago
can't stop myself reading your story!

I like your story and it's good and it is like a novel

raven616raven616about 13 years ago

enjoying reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it

It needs some editing but all in all very good writing and story line. I love strong females and alfa males. Love the power struggel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

A very good story. Full of lust and suspense. I enjoy the humor and where the story is going.

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