All Comments on 'Return To Innocence'

Excellent write-up. Such soft sensual writing . I will read now your other stories too.

Thank you. I found this story to be quite different, fable-like. I think it might stay with me for a long time.

1/17/2024

Thank you. Your story is very well written. The parts of the story about you and Ashwani was very beautiful. I am so sorry about all you went through and the loss of your true love. I hope he comes back around! Happy Valentine’s Day.

What happens when a man and a woman fall in love with each other? We can safely assume either of 3 possibilities -- (a) they live happily ever after, (b) they fight and split up, (c) they live happily for sometime and then drift apart.

But what if the man in the story is 70 years old, and the woman is only 21? In such a case, we can expect only 1 outcome. A doomed relationship. A certain failure. Social norms dictate an "acceptable" age-gap as a necessity for a successful romantic relationship.

But who decides what is an "acceptable" age difference? What if a 70 year old man and a 21 year old woman build their own dream world and find it acceptable? This is the story of 2 such individuals who build a dream world together, and then see it get shattered by forces that were beyond their control. This is the story of 2 dreamers, loners and lovers who choose innocence over social norms.

This is the story of their return to innocence.

What a write up! First time felt sad reading a erotica!

Great story :)

This author is altogether at another level. I never felt anything like this. He is a true artist and would be a great story teller. Write for movies someday.

Enigma. I clicked because of a cleverly titled story. And hoped. Read about four paragraphs. Ran screaming with my hair smouldering to youtube and found a nine minute version of Return To Innocence and played it as I continued to read. I've never read Indian authored porn before and I'm not even sure that matters. Just don't know any Indian people just like I know few Asians, so I figured it wouldn't work for me. This is like so much better than anything I've read on here...not necessarily in the obvious way...which is what guided my thinking while stumbling around an erotica site. Until today. Congratulations sir/ma'am/author whatever applies. Also, my algorithm just took me from Enigma to Heaven And Hell because....Dio.