All Comments on 'Return to St. George'

This is a great story and I hope that you don't let so many years come between installments!

Absolutely wonderful! I do look forward to the next installment, and hope it will come soon!

Love the build-up of Harry's relationships before jumping into having sex.

This was an excellent story, with real development of the people as individuals, and an emphasis on love as a key part of sex. I can think of several similar stories by other authors on the site, and I have the same interesting reaction: On the one hand, this was completely self-contained; on the other, it has ingredients for a sequel.

I thought I recognized snips of your Legally Nude in this story and liked it. Would be willing to see how Harry and Sandy grow together. Nice tale.

Excellent. Nicely paced. Looking forward to more. Will Heidi, as well, drop a strap on skype? Perhaps the whole swim-team can be liberated with a St George swim meet…

I hope you write another sequel to the St. George story line. Especially about Harry and Sandy,

Very good story with nice character development. Please note that several times the word whom was used instead of the correct word who. Whom is used with usually a preposition, to whom, of whom, with whom, from whom as examples. Who is used usually next to the person or name such as “Mr Smith, who likes apples” or “She, who must be obeyed, demanded action.” A small criticism but it is quite common in the majority of your stories. I still gave the story 5* though.

well, i feel sad that you wrote Sara out of tthis tale, she was smart, sassy and very sexual.. oh well, so be it.. well written and all that,,,the new love interest seems rather innocent,nieve etc, half his age,,dont expect may-december romances to last long especially when sandy says he doesnt need to ever visit the "garden"