All Comments on 'Revenge, Best Served Nude'

by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Excellently told tale!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Long story about nothing.

Norway_1705Norway_170512 months ago

Very smooth style, cheerful dialogues, relatable and realistic characters. Keep writing!

I liked this short story.

May I suggest a more appropriate use of tags? Delete "post-pandemic" and add "non-erotic." There is nothing wrong with writing a non-erotic tale, as long as readers are warned in advance.

MyBareTorsoMyBareTorso12 months ago

This is such an incredibly well written, truly absorbing story. The characters are so wonderfully well developed, and the whole Hi-Tech workplace culture is fascinatingly detailed. Great, great stuff! 5 🤩 Stars! Thanks for taking the time...a lot of deep thought and hard work has obviously gone into this great, true Nude Day story. Bravo!

Flh3241Flh324111 months ago

This gets the vote for the 2nd best story in the contest

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...