All Comments on 'River Walkers'

nice to have you back babe!

i love the last 2 lines of this one!!

kisses,

T

Your writing is very good. I could picture the two of them walking along the river.Keep writing, but watch out for those adverbs. Take care and be well.

... in the river! Otherwise - erotic.

:) Ya know what I mean....

We need more of this one. Perhaps the story could be continued to include more natural interludes in nude settings where a natural occurrence of fertility develops with no hinderence of birth control?