All Comments on 'Roommate Wanted'

Great lead in and great overall story. Enjoyed it.

Great little story! I enjoyed it immensely! Keep up the good work.

I love the story. Sex should be a build up yo to the main event!

I love this story. You hit all the right emotions. I will watch you and keep reading.

really enjoyed it

A lovely story of two lonely, damaged people, coming together and healing each other. The slow build was perfect and the heat of the sex was fantastic.

That was such lovely read. I always like when I can get lost in the characters like I did with this story.

Will be reading what else you have posted and hoping to see more from you in the future!

GREAT story...VERY well written. Change a few of the details and leave out Jack and what he tried to pull and it's ALOT like what my girlfriend and I have been through getting to where we are now :)

this is seriously the best story i have read on here in a long, long time! i loved the sweetness, the hotness, the damsel-in-distressness, everything! PLEASE please write more like this!

It felt like I was there. Thank you for inviting me into your imagination.

After reading the story, and the comments, there is only one thing to say, but it's apparent that everyone else has said it already! Great story!

You had me right there with them. Thank you.

I loved it. The way you took time to build up to things. It was a great ride.

Thanks.

I really liked this story. I loved the build up. great story. Please write more.

You described a feeling I once had with a roommate that I could never have put into words! Great story!

This is the best story you've written. I enjoyed the build up of tension and the character development. It's wonderful! I look forward to reading more of your writing. Thank you for a great story that is also sensual and sexy.

I must say that I've been reading literotica stories for a few years now, and while I have come across quite a few good ones, this one was absolutely beautiful by all means in every way. I loved the build up and the way you didn't overly due the character description or make them seem conceited but in the most non-chalant way but amazing all together. Nice work. Please keep writing.

I really liked how this story developed. I really enjoyed each word that I read. Beautiful Job!

really enjoyed the slow, smoldering build-up !

made me envious of the hero

and

your writing skills

I do skim a bit since I'm a slow reader, but wondered why she never said "I love you" or did she?

The best story I've read on this site

Wow, a beautiful story that all of us would have loved to experienced. So real the way you have written it, as if you lived it yourself in just that way ...maybe you did. I am going to find other stories you have written, you have a great way with words, drawing pictures. Thanks.

Why would a woman who is “moon bathing” naked wear a bra underneath a robe, just to go from the house to the yard? That makes no sense.

I enjoyed the slow burn to the end of the story. I really hope that there will a sequel to the character's relationship.

This should be a”Beyond Hallmark” movie. Gawd I wish it was a thing