by gapster7
Loved your story and your storytelling. Your writing style is entertaining. I would like to read about their week in Boston. Did you ever post that escapade? I will be in Boston in October. It would be fun to see where they explored the city and each other.
The language you use is great. Some of the best adjectives and verbiage I’ve seen on the site. That being said, please tag your stories with “cheating” if they include it. Stories where someone claims to still be in love with their partner but is then unfaithful are not enjoyable for me.