All Comments on 'Sandra'

Just spoiled a little by changing from first person to third person on the second page.

I became he.

First person made it more personal.and erotic.

Keep up the good work.

The scale only goes to 5 or I'd have given you more!

I read this line, then skipped to page 3 and gave you the 1 you deserve.

"The house was a two-story, three-bedroom bungalow "

Bungalow def'n : noun. 1A low house having only one storey

ESL story for sure

To Anonymous above. A bungalow is not always one story (as you spell it storey I infer that you live in the UK or Australia). If there is a second story, it is usually under the roof, with dormers. By making such a rash decision on a rather minor point you missed a very sexy tale.

My only criticism of the story is that the interaction with Sandra felt hurried. It could have used more buildup, like the interaction with his sister.

Bobby is a lucky guy. He has 3 women to love. It would be great if he could give all 3 a baby bump

wish i could give less than 1*

I absolutely think a part 2 is in order.

He should get all 3 pregnant

True incest is best. And best is with Mom

Great expression of love.Put a wonderful and respectful spin on incest.

Very loving. Thank you.

:)

This was a good story til the end. You rushed the loving with the mom. They got into bed and when they were finished.....

I was enthralled as you kept dragging another person into the plot, fantastic writing. Please continue to share stories with us. Taboo is your forte, I can tell.

Very well written. This is the fourth story I have read of yours. You have become one of my favorite authors here on Literotica.

Very loving and tender story but would have loved to see how thing worked out more.another chapter would be nice.

The description of the sex with his mother was pathetic. He's just a toy now. 2*

Cecilia's parents were idiots. Bobby didn't come from a 'broken home.' Sandra's husband (Janet and Bobby's father) died. He and Sandra weren't divorced. A 'broken home' is when the parents divorce. They insisted that Cecilia was 'marrying down.' Sandra, Bobby and Janet most likely had more money than they did, due to the settlement from the Dad's death. They used that excuse so they didn't have to pay for Ceclilia's wedding. Sad.

I gave it a rating of 5. This is a pretty well told story (an easy 4 rating) that also describes sexy PUBIC HAIR (that should ALWAYS be there in mom stories and be abundantly there / thick untrimmed) as a dark triangle.It was an easy 5 when I read the hairy pussy description.

That was actually one of the sweetest stories I have ever read on here. great job!