All Comments on 'Sarah's Part Time Job'

She was just too damn good to allow her to get away. I think she softened him up well!

And she turned out to be everything he needed and wanted!!

That "Wakey, wakey" bit cracked me up.

A good story with a good ending, JPB.

you surprised me JPB

Great story. Happy ending! Terrific!

Nice job - I liked the characters in this. It was a fun read.

Regards, DJ

fantastic story. keep up the good work

slow, steady and small steps in a

methodical approach to get what he wants

Bob, You have a talented way of taking a plain sex topic and making an enjoyable story from it.

You're always good, Bob, but this time you outdid your self.

I've head of guys doing some unusual things to win a woman, but I think this one was really unique.

You're always good, Bob, but this time you outdid your self.

I've head of guys doing some unusual things to win a woman, but I think this one was really unique.

you're a pro! great work.

it was great, i think you should write the next part that was eluded too. thanks for your stories they are always good reads keep up the good work

I suppose that I will be in the moral minority, here. Good story as far as the technical elements go. You do have style. But, I have to confess that I found the calculated manipluations of this man, and his willingness to take advantage of a woman in a bad situation, quite reprehensible. Yes, I know, "all's well that ends well," but I think if the lady were to find out what actually transpired and the motivation behind it, there quite possibly would be another divorce in the works.

While I didn't love it, this was alot better than the stuff posted weeks ago.

To each their own but it would have been more erotic without the paying for it and her just being seduced with remorse. Since you were going from pig to hero, it would have gotten you there and married alot more in your style of the good guy.

I have to agree with Queen of Mars and Nightowl22. This one just hit me right, I did enjoy it. Just my moral compass and the head games, but its fantasy and dang good. It was as good a seduction plot as any and the wank of a husband made it all innocuous.

Great fun

PT

What a silly piece of crap. Predictable, silly & down right booooooring!

GET A LIFE!! STOP spending every waking moment write this bullshit!! If you must write PLEASE spend a little time and produce a decent story or GET A LIFE!!!

I thought that this story would have been more believable if, when the narrator asks the woman to become his courtesan, she had just told him no chance. After all, he's just spent months corrupting her and turning her into a prostitute; it would be a much more satisfying story if she decided to not hqave anything to do with him any more. "Sorry, our relationship is just business."

Had to rate this story 100 Bob, it was really good. Very well written.

I hope you will continue on with it. This could be one of the best stories of all time in this catagory. We already know she is willing to do strangers for her kids sake, let's see her do some for her husbands sake.

Thanks again,

George

good job bob, once again - this is definitely one of my favs! Keep doing stories like this..

Man, what a fun story. Can't believe I missed this one when it first came out. I've never published anything I've written, but I'm workin on a story similar to this one you wrote except I'm bribing my wife for sex. Keep up the great writing you do.

I just found this one and as you can tell by the rating I liked it. It was good to see a plan come together and then exceed his expectations. Good job. I guess I'm going to have to start at story number one and read all of your work.

Bootylicious tail/tale, must have missed it along the way. Poignant, funny, and oh so HOT. Thank you.

No realistic enough for 5***** but too good for 4**** so I gave it 5*****.

Well, at least the guy took care of the woman in the end and didn't drop her like a hot potato. All is well that ends well, or something like that, right? ;)

She should have kicked him in the nuts and then divorced his ass. Who needs a pimp for a husband.

Love love love. Would have liked it to take a move bdsm turn but great none the less.

From one sleaze to another.

The author defines his protagonist's character when he has him unabashedly trying to seduce happily married female.

The fact that husband was a sleaze does not change fact her boss was also one. So much so he turned her into a whore!

This is one of the gems that keeps me sifting through JPB stories. Even when I do not like the story (often because it is unfinished), there is something about his straightforward writing style that is engaging. In this case his dialog with Sarah that gradually led her along including reverse psychology -- how can writers conceive these things? Dam.

Only thing would have liked in this story, well, it's a big step to take on a woman with kids, and the kids got no attention.

Paul in Oklahoma

his last comment.

She is used by two reprehensible men. Well written as usual. I have to give credit to JPB for that but some of his stories don't mesh with my moral compass.

Wow, that guy is a predator! At some point Sarah had to of realized she had been played. I can only wonder what her thought processes were to go along with it after that realization.

I think he was just running her with that last comment. He played her for sure, but that was a good story.

A predator for main character, wow and this story got a very high rating

Sneaky bastard! Played her, she enjoyed it, dropped the drunk, and became his full time mistress. Not sure ‘predator’ fits, but he certainly played the cards he was felt well.

This fellow is a writer with an endless imagination. Painting pictures using words. Looking forward to the next one. I like surprises! R

Excellent, everyone is a winner, except the drunk loser husband.