All Comments on 'Science Experiment'

You had a great, fun, sexy story until the end. You dropped the ball on the one yard line. Keep writing, I'll expect better from you.

I agree... the story was great!!! Just delete the very last paragraph ;)

Apart from that... loved it.

PERFECT as always.

hot story really liked twist at the vine doing him too

hot story really liked twist at the vine doing him too

Some spots where I think your wording could be better, and you should develop or at least describe your characters a little. Also, some more detail about the plant and how it senses it's "prey" would be good.

Otherwise, an interesting story. I like that the plant turned on it's creator, and it taking pictures of them was a nice touch, though a bit hard to believe. This is where some more detail about the plant would be helpful. Is their some element of it's genetic manipulation that could explain this?

This is a great story! Very hot! The ex-couple dynamic was also very good. Also who doesn't love a fun horny plant? Thank you for sharing it!

He is damn lucky that his ex-wife did not have a lawyer take his testicles for his kidnapping of her, and then her non-consent ravishment by his science experiment without proper safeguards.