All Comments on 'Secret Desires'

Even though Im not that old, Thats a Dream come true.

hope there will be another chapter

Wow... what a great read. I do hope that you continue to develop this story into a longer one.

I hope your planning on more chapters......I really enjoyed it

The story is fuckingly gooooooooodddddd

Very well written. A unique plot and well constructed. Lots of good graphic sex.

I would suggest you do a better job of proof reading/spelling. You had several mistakes. The tension building would have been even better had Melinda almost caught her dad with Charlene a few more times.

Overall, is is very well done, probably your best.