by austin_erotica
Great writing as always look forward to more thanks for sharing. Mechmanas
+1 for character building/plot brewing, Looking forward to moooooarrrr
Another excellent chapter! I am so into this story!
Return of a major character??? Daminus??????? I live in hope because he really didn't have enough time to shine and I would have loved to see where you went with him. Plus we need Evelyn to recover her senses and it's the only way she will.
Whatever you plan, I will be patiently waiting to read it! Great work!
I just stumbled on your story and have read all 8 chapters. I LOVE IT! It has taken a little extra brain power to keep all the characters straight but that might be because its after 5 am now that I'm finished. In any case it has not deterred my love of your story. Please write more soon! I cant wait!
and I'm thoroughly enjoying it!! Should have stopped to comment earlier, but I've been so anxious to find out what happens next!
I love the way you weave Jon's past into the dreams, not quite giving the whole story, but just enough to let our imaginations run wild with the tragedy of it. Very well done.
Can't put my iPad down. Wonderful story and chracters! Jon is such an interesting and mysterious character -love it!
just grt you kept us all on the toe.i really exited to see next will reveal.
just grt job.