All Comments on 'Shadow Dagger Ch. 09'

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tartan9tartan9about 14 years ago
Amazing!

Such an amazingly well written story, that keeps your attention with such interesting characters. You start to read a chapter and before you know it your at the end of it, it just flows so well.

Looking forward to the next instalment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

I await each chapter of your tale with baited breath. This is an awesome story... I hope that I don't have to wait long for the next installment...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
love It

This is great i love this story cant wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing Mechmanas

catman71catman71about 14 years ago
great

and i have a feeling that ashford sophina and jon plus evelyn are going to become even more interconnected as the story goes along. i await your next installment with great interest

JazCullenJazCullenabout 14 years ago
Damn!

Wish Daminus could have stayed and yet he needs to be dead for Evelyn to become the true power she now is.

So looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work :-)

NayeliNayeliabout 14 years ago
Better and better

Your story us getting more and more intense and unexpected. I'm looking forward to the mega-chapter ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
MOARararar

cant wait for moarrrrrrrrrrrr

LiazabethLiazabethabout 14 years ago
Wow ..

wow wow :) cant wait ... wonderful story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
AAARRRGGGHHH!!

Hurry with the next chapter PPLLLEEEAAASSEEE!!

MissElf1MissElf1almost 14 years ago
Wow, great character building

The way you explain Jon is great and the way that Evelyn greaves is a tear jerker. Great emotional connection with your characters.

ChaamChaamalmost 13 years ago
Amazing buildup

I love how you reveal more and more details of the world and the characters and how you do it. This is insanely captivating!

sirreadsalot10sirreadsalot10almost 13 years ago
I am really...

...enjoying this! You have a depth of story and intrigue that is incredible. on to 10.

sweetjanielsweetjanielalmost 13 years ago
Oh my....

I absolutely love this story....that was so beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow... Just Wow!

Words can not describe the beauty of this chapter. It is very difficult to get me all choked up but you did it. This story continues to unravel like an experience that you never want to end. Your writing skills are just fa-nominal and please please please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow! Just wow!!

I must admitt that I had nothing better to read on this website so I stuck with yours. But i am SO glad that I continued reading! I have read alot of stories but man did you make it to the top :) I really love the raw emotions. They are expressed in the most wonderful way.

Thank you for posting such a wonderful story here! I love it!

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 10 years ago
Wonderful Chapter!

Though Jon seems a little quick to blame someone else for someone he killed. Granted he is partially correct, however if he didn't take the contract, I think things would have turned out different. Think it would have fit nicely if he promised that after this coming up battle, his fate was in her hands. Still, this isn't that important

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
incredible

beautifully written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You are A W E S O M E !

Your stories are up there with those of intrepid fate, Over_Red, JC the continuer

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Best chapter yet, looking forward to the big one coming. Thank you. Rgman

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
FUCKIG WHORE

I hate cheating whores like sarah. FUck her

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