by austin_erotica
Such an amazingly well written story, that keeps your attention with such interesting characters. You start to read a chapter and before you know it your at the end of it, it just flows so well.
Looking forward to the next instalment!
I await each chapter of your tale with baited breath. This is an awesome story... I hope that I don't have to wait long for the next installment...
This is great i love this story cant wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing Mechmanas
and i have a feeling that ashford sophina and jon plus evelyn are going to become even more interconnected as the story goes along. i await your next installment with great interest
Wish Daminus could have stayed and yet he needs to be dead for Evelyn to become the true power she now is.
So looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work :-)
Your story us getting more and more intense and unexpected. I'm looking forward to the mega-chapter ;)
The way you explain Jon is great and the way that Evelyn greaves is a tear jerker. Great emotional connection with your characters.
I love how you reveal more and more details of the world and the characters and how you do it. This is insanely captivating!
...enjoying this! You have a depth of story and intrigue that is incredible. on to 10.
Words can not describe the beauty of this chapter. It is very difficult to get me all choked up but you did it. This story continues to unravel like an experience that you never want to end. Your writing skills are just fa-nominal and please please please keep writing.
I must admitt that I had nothing better to read on this website so I stuck with yours. But i am SO glad that I continued reading! I have read alot of stories but man did you make it to the top :) I really love the raw emotions. They are expressed in the most wonderful way.
Thank you for posting such a wonderful story here! I love it!
Though Jon seems a little quick to blame someone else for someone he killed. Granted he is partially correct, however if he didn't take the contract, I think things would have turned out different. Think it would have fit nicely if he promised that after this coming up battle, his fate was in her hands. Still, this isn't that important
Your stories are up there with those of intrepid fate, Over_Red, JC the continuer