by mixoscopist
Too good...some really good writing and it all seemed so alive as I read it.
Keep it up...
Highly recommended reading for other visitors to this site.
A pleasant diversion from the 'wham, bam, thank you maam' stuff!! The flow of the story is good as is the presentation. A very original concept. Hope to see more of you here.
Your story is one of the best of literotica stories. I have had read enough to judge it, trust me. Keep it up, good luck
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That's really good work. It's a touch of romance, erotica and also very motivating.
very sweet and sensuous, nothing wild and dirty just sumthing very beautiful and erotic in its own way.
I was in tears reading this sensual story of healing ,just lovely .
This story managed to not get soppy and maintain a good tempo when it came to all the action. The female protagonist doesn't strangely start enjoying her degradation as is the case in most stories. Sensible is the only word to describe this story and I loved it.
& thats saying something... This piece is right on so many levels! Like ... totally love love love it! Its a journey in just 3 pages! Beautiful!
Loved the story. Beautiful mix of emotions, sensuality and eroticism with a little romance.