All Comments on 'Show Moms Ch. 08-09'

A wonderful series, I'm only sorry that it seems to have concluded. I hope you'll get back to work on Gigalo now....

Was well worth the wait. Great writing!!!!!

This piece rocks. It's full of emotion and just enough sex to keep things hummming.

Bravo!

I have read the whole series. Love the way it all ties together. Please do more stories.

This was the best story series I've read here in a very long time.I hope you keep writing.

For a last few years this is the best series I've read.

The Best With sex but lots of Love. Realy great. Write some more!

story and series, one of the best on this site.

Wow. This one reads better the 2nd time around. Funny and sexy as hell.

An absolutely wonderful series!

Awesome ending! Great series! It was a great story, from beginning to end. I NEVER expected to like this story, but I absolutely loved it. Very, very good job!

Sweet story. No ugly nonsense. A bit of a stretch on believability with respect to the shows, but within the story's universe very uplifting and clever.

Loved it, exciting from start to finish a little stretch at times but quite fun and entertaining to read

First piece of porn that I've read that had charm and wit. I was

actually smiling at the end and in true show business tradition: always

leave 'em clamoring for more.

Absolutely awsome story !!!!!!!!!

Absolutely a great story! Thanks, can't wait to read others...

I hate Allen, but I love all the other characters. Honestly kinda surprised that Angela won the whole thing. That seemed more clich than Robin winning. Seemed a little rushed in the beginning. Again, I really hate Allen for some reason and it woulda been cool if Robin just divorced his ass and her and Terry could be like two wives, lol. I'm not displeased at the ending, but I guess that's just not how I woulda ended it.

Who could tell one could write a beautiful story with a plot like that? Thank you very much!

One of the best series I have ever read. Almost like watching it unfold.

LY good. This was well thought out and very well written. Five stars for the series. Kudos !!!!! ;)

I can not think of enough superlatives to express my feelings.

I liked the ending where you didnt go for the oldtime standard of winner of everything

Beating the Connie B but not winning was a nice ttwist

Held me captive all through all 9 chapters. I just don't think I could do that to a mother. After all, she is a wife also. But the reasons behind it maybe justified it a little. But it was one of the finest stories that didn't make me angry. Very good story.

National milf show, what a novel idea! I'd support it.

But the author takes it seriously and is talented enough to pull the reader through every chapter. Good stuff.

Let's reunite and I'll enjoy watching you screw someone other than me! Riiight. Of course. Fucking brilliant. That is luuurve. True love. Sorry, I meant, true bullshit. Enunciate, man! Shoot. I've enjoyed more than a few of your works. This one started with a premise just sickeningly anti-marriage, anti-fidelity and anti-love enough to be real, and ended with a gut twistingly realistic display of the kinds of sickening selfishness and perverting and mutating of the meaning of marital love and fidelity that humans, both men and women, are capable of, even fond of. And no, I'm not talking about gay marriage. So, I hated it; but I have to respect the realism. May they all get AIDS. In a just world....

Then why can't you just accept that some girl would realize that the guy she loves is so great that she'd be willing to share him with someone else she loves a little bit...?

Especially when that someone else has clearly done so many spectacular things for her that she didn't even realize...?

Loved this series... feel free to write more in this vein...

One of the very best stories on this site. Brilliant.

This story was one of the best reads,the humor the feelings were perfect. It made me wish there was more. All the things I look for in a good story the sex content was perfect it made the story believable for me. Many compliments to this author one of the best reads so far only one other that led me to comment so far. There are many good ones but few greats! Thanks for this one!

D.D.

have to very different from most stories on here. great read , surprise ending . hope to see some more in this genre down the road. I would give this 7 stars if I could..

It was an interesting story, but the premise of treating women like show dogs is a little misogynistic no?

Loved the sort of ebb and flow of the story. The way characters evolved as it went along. Great mixture of sex, humor and emotion(not sure if that's exactly the word I'm looking for). Great job

AND MADE ALL OF THEM LOOK CHEAP AND NASTY WHORES..WHICH IS BASICALLY WHAT ALL MILF'S ARE....

this was an interesting finish. Can't call it a conclusion because there were so many issues left unresolved. But, it was certainly fun to follow along as it played out.

A Preposterous Hypothesis story!

You got all the balls in the air...and kept them there!

Congratulations!

Enjoyed this greatly. Thanks much. .

One of the best stories on the site.

This comment relates to the entire series, not just the last two chapters. I must admit to some disappointment at first with the level of sex. I almost didn’t read chapter 2 and what a mistake that would have been! You have a wicked sense of humor! You also had a good plot with how both Robin and Terry were transformed from the uptight religious snobs to the open, loving caring women.

It's too bad the author isn't still writing. A great next chapter would be the Pastors wife Jane Becker asking for an experienced handler to take her on after not advancing very far. Seems it would be a great fit to continue the story. Already experienced, someone it seems the current story principals already know of and approve of…

Oh well…. I thoroughly enjoyed the story the several times i've read it over the years. Have to imagine the addition in my own mind. And who would Terry have as her handler in a number of years when she has had children that reached age 6? Could he complain about her wanting to do this when he has done it at least twice? After all, she is a "goddess" so definitely pretty enough to compete.

Man I like to Fuck

And they tried harder

Really really good story, beautify told.

Had all the ingredients needed for a sexy/loving read

One of the funniest I’ve read on this site.

Excellent! I usually like more erotic sex in stories, but this is superbly written and held my interest (both for the story and for the promise of what more erotic things would still happen.

Wow, a story I will read again and again. Very unusual, sweet, loving and a great ending. My only thought of what could be missing was that more needed about the daughter and husband.

What a blend of comedic, sexy, and general goofiness in the nutty idea of a MILF series of contests in some kind of complex blend of shows that lead to the play-offs, which must mirror some sort of sport for the masses...I can't do it justice but it's a Five...Jeez, what a concept

I'm just assuming Angela's handler was her husband, and he was younger than her.

Loved it hope you continue the series 5 stars!

Wonderfully weird.

Hilarious and wonderful and hot as the fires burning in the sun. Completely implausible and great at the same time. BardnotBard