All Comments on 'Shylo Morra - Early Days'

I am still looking for an editor. Having asked a dozen people I thought the system was broken, but then I got one response, then nothing.

I received a lot of help from the publisher, I'd like to think he/she liked the story enough to point out my poor dialogue structure, and rewrote the story three times. Even then they fixed it a bit, probably tired of sending it back to me.

Thanks for taking care of my baby.

So, if you like the story, I have six chapters waiting for a touch up, and I'm hoping to save the hard working staff here at Literotica from having to deal with it.

Anyway, I hope you liked it.

"Slowly I rolled the thong, like an old carpet, past my sweet anus. I'm sure it was damp too, since I was self lubricating like I was preparing to mount the entire room of swinging dicks. The sensation of the clothe rolling down, applying light pressure to my labia was incredible."

I really liked the different job interview that Ben gives Shylo.

This is delicious! Love the descriptions of how hot Shylo gets teasing and exposing herself to all the men in the audience. Love it!