All Comments on 'Sirene'

Enjoyed this piece; I could easily visualize what was happening on the beach both physically and spiritually. Hope that you continue to contribute erotic stories to this site.

Such a visually strong writer! Loved it! X

A well-written tale with some very interesting imagery. I liked the way you left it to the reader to decide for themselves whether or not the narrator was dreaming or truly experiencing the events. I spotted a few typos, nothing serious that a careful proof-reading would put right. All in all, I enjoyed the tale.

.....sensually poetic....