All Comments on 'Sister's Dreams Come True'

I liked the first part but what was his name, Shawn or Mark? Right in the middle his name just charged

I'D GUESS YOU'RE A WOMAN WITH A FANTASY! IT IS JUST A GUESS BUT BEING A SENIOR EDITOR FOR YEARS AT A MAJOR PUBLISHING COMPANY GIVES ME THE IDEA, READING TENS OF THOUSANDS OF SHORT STORIES. YOU DID A GOOD JOB AND WAS WELL WRITTEN! THANK YOU

Nicely done.

@b0br0b Shawn was her roommate. Mark is the brother. Yes, there is an unexplained discrepancy about her having a roommate Shawn and then being home with Mark.

Guess she isn't living at her parents' place and was just staying over for a weekend or something to seduce her brother.

The story wasn't so bad, but it sorely needed a proofreader.

A little bit juvenile then there was this "they were a C cup"; another VS website fan it seems.

Yes, they definitely needed each other. Well, hopefully they will accept what happened and cuddle and then decide to bang each other senseless. Of course his sister will want Mark to re-enact one of her hot dreams and he will be more than ready. It would be great if they spend all day screwing each other in ways they each have dreamed of. Now is the time for descriptive hot action to bond them as sexual partners. Much more to explore and share. Yes, we need more chapters. Thanks.

write another chapter. This one was so boring. I don't know how anyone could make sex so boring, but you did. I fell asleep half way through.